Friday, May 6, 2016

Dolls and Dream Knight ( Chapter 2 )

……. Jackson pushed Marie and accidentally Marie fell down and fell on Junior’s chest, because of that Junior had to be rushed to the hospital.
            After that accident, everyday when Marie went to school she’s always being mocked again by all of girls in her school because of the accident that she had with Junior. Junior was a popular boy in his school and all the girls were loved him so much. So, that was the reason why all of the girls got mad at her. Marie being bullied by her friends at the school yard. They poured water,egg and flour over Marie. Justin, Jay, Mark and Jackson saw that Marie had been bullied by her friends, they went to the school yard to helped Marie directly. Unexpectedly, Marie got mad when they helped her.
She said, “ Why did you help me?! If you helped me like this I will look weak in front of them!”
“Look at you, you look pitiful and you said you didn’t need our help?” ,said Mark.
Marie cried and said, “ I looked like this because the accident with Junior last time! If all of you not try to pushed me when I met Junior, it wasn’t become like this, right?!”
Jackson who pushed Marie when the accident happened said, “ I’m sorry, I’m really sorry about that. I didn’t mean to do that.”
Marie said, “ arghhh, forget it! I can’t say anything now. Let’s go home and I have to clean up my body.”
“Ok Marie, let’s get up!” said Jay. They helped Marie to get up and walked to their home.
            After they arrived at Marie’s house, she thanks to them because they had helped her although Marie got mad at first. They asked Marie to cooked something for them because they were hadn’t eaten yet and Marie agree with that. When Marie cooked something in the kitchen, that four boys played football at the yard and accidentally “PRANGGG” the ball hit Marie’s old camera which is given by her mom before her mom passed away. That camera is the gift from her mom which contains lot of precious moments of photos and videos from her precious childhood with her beloved mother. Marie asked them what happened but they didn’t tell Marie what happened actually. Marie grab something that being hidden behind Jackson. She was very shocked because the camera was broken.
“OH MY GOD BOYS! WHAT DID YOU DO?!!” ,said Marie.
That four boys felt really sorry to Marie. “I’m really sorry Marie, we didn’t mean to do that.” ,said Jackson.
Marie got mad and said, “Go away from here and don’t come back! I don’t want too see your face! ALL OF YOU!”
That four boys gave up and went away from Marie’s house. They will found a way to repair Marie’s camera.
            One day, Marie met Junior at the basketball court. Marie felt sorry and a bit shy in front of Junior but he act like a nice boy in front of Marie besides Junior had a grudge to Marie. Junior pretended to liked Marie but actually not. He knew that Marie liked him a lot. Suddenly Junior confessed his feeling to Marie and asked Marie to be his girlfriend. Marie a bit hesitant to answer Junior’s feeling because it was to sudden for her. Marie couldn’t answered and asked Junior to wait. One day, when Marie went school she met Justin, he gave back Marie’s camera. Marie felt so happy that her camera finally back. She said sorry to Justin, Mark, Jay and Jackson because she got mad before. They came back to Marie’s house and she told that Junior had confess his feeling to her. That four boys were shocked and told Marie not to believe what Junior said. Marie told the boys that Junior was a good boy and he was not like that. That boys couldn’t say anything anymore because they knew that Marie liked Junior so much.
            On the next day, Marie and Junior were sitting on a bench. They were laughing together until Justin called Marie to come to him. When Marie got up from her sit, Junior tried to stop Marie not to come to Justin. Justin got mad at Junior’s behavior and came to him. When Junior tried to ran from Justin suddenly Justin used his power and Junior was freezed. Justin took Marie away from Junior, they didn’t know that Junior was realized something that actually Justin and friends weren’t human but……


Still curious about the next part of this story? Who are Justin, Mark, Jay  and Jackson actually? Yap! Wait for me on the last part of this story! See you and God Bless You^0^
            
           
           



4 comments:

  1. Lala, you wrote in good way. I like your style in writing. From the grammar also the chronologically order.

    Keep growing!

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  2. Good story Lala. I like your story, my curiosity finally answered. You wrote the story in detail. Keep improving your grammar and vocabulary. take care!

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